1randombeauty
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Melanie oh Melanie, where art thou, Melanie and your nice big boobs. I'm looking forward to hearing all about You taking Devin inside your little pussy.
Her Big stepbrother moves in...
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Shall I compare thee, Melanie, to a summers day?
To two large melons, lying in the hay?
To two hills betwixt a large tree hath yet to lay?
Perhaps thy prefers comparison to a river then, where a snake may say: let a brother slither in?
To two large melons, lying in the hay?
To two hills betwixt a large tree hath yet to lay?
Perhaps thy prefers comparison to a river then, where a snake may say: let a brother slither in?
Just another dead end to a great story
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The last installment was more than a year ago on September 10, 2022. The author was active on the site a month ago. I think it’s safe to say that this one is, unfortunately, DEAD.
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Yeah you’re probably right
Sometimes I genuinely consider picking up and revitalizing some of these. I don't wanna disrespect the author but it's a damn shame to leave stuff like this hanging.
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I feel the same way about some of the stories
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Stop doing that! It's dead! Deal with it!
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The last story addition was in March. With all of the comments since then and still no more story postings, it's dead.
Do it! Better you than this ghost we got haunting the forums now.
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I will say, though, that I recently reread some of the story, the chapter that involved Kelly, Mum’s hot Asian friend. Very hot scene. If the story resumes, I’d love for her to make a return to the fold.
I'd even be happy if he started another story and came back to this later so he doesn't feel trapped by this one.
Would just require you guys to go with it to make it fun for him again. Like we definitely get that he's an amazing writer so of course we want more, but maybe there's too much pressure.
Paralysis and perfectionism of high expectations must also be a factor. But he's such a gifted writer for these things it's certainly a shame to not hone it, even with one sentence of progress a day.
Who knows he's so good with these stories maybe he could have a little sidehustle eventually writing these amazing stories more consistently.
Would just require you guys to go with it to make it fun for him again. Like we definitely get that he's an amazing writer so of course we want more, but maybe there's too much pressure.
Paralysis and perfectionism of high expectations must also be a factor. But he's such a gifted writer for these things it's certainly a shame to not hone it, even with one sentence of progress a day.
Who knows he's so good with these stories maybe he could have a little sidehustle eventually writing these amazing stories more consistently.
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