I want to be a writer and am just starting to write little short stories. I wrote this one in about 20 minutes. I'm sure there's a ton of errors both in syntax and grammar and it probably sucks but I need practice and what better way for it than to just write for the sake of writing? I would like to know what you all think and I look forward to reading any feedback.

"Her"

There she is. It's amazing that a single girl can possess all of the qualities I want...

someotherguy