I want to be a writer and am just starting to write little short stories. I wrote this one in about 20 minutes. I'm sure there's a ton of errors both in syntax and grammar and it probably sucks but I need practice and what better way for it than to just write for the sake of writing? I would like to know what you all think and I look forward to reading any feedback.

"Her"

There she is. It's amazing that a single girl can possess all of the qualities I want...

someotherguy

I've made more than a couple of attempts at asking girls out but so far I get the "Sure" answer followed by the "I can't that day. I'll let you know when I can" answer. After that, nothing. Please don't think of this as another "Poor me" blog but this is pretty annoying. A man can only get shot down so many times before he starts to think there's something wrong with him.

I feel that I have a lot to offer. Not bad looking, great sense of humor, witty,...

someotherguy