Keep it coming. Your story is very hot, amusing and satisfying. As pecular has this may seem, all the semi homo erotic overtures involving male group bonding and masterbation in the lockeroom, is strangely very appealing to this straight guy.

There seems to be a primal cord plucked by your story that every guy who has pasted thru the holo halls of high school touches on one way or another. To envision yourselves as a virtual god amoug the untouchable high school elite crowd is just awesome.

Of course, your baseball elites have privilegdes that exceed anything I ever imaged back in the day. In my opinion, the more you grandize the character and his school the better. So, keep it up.