Sorry, but the main characters nauseating self description lost me at the second paragraph... This man has NO weaknesses? No doubts? Sounds like a screaming narcisist... I didn[t get to where he described his penis- but from the first paragraph I am guessing what..20 inches? and um....10 inches around?

"I’m like a male Helen of Troy. I’m a caricature of male perfection: hugely broad shoulders, narrow waist, perfectly formed ass, well-defined back and so on. " Wasn't this guy on Melrose place or some other vacuous show?


(you wanted feedback....just putting in my .02- its rare that I find a 'fuck story' that much of a turn off... but blech...)