It's wonderful. I can't express how gratified I am that the people here are taking my story so seriously. On most of the sites where I post stories, they are all but ignored. I don't mind that the reaction is negative, because at least it proves that someone has read the story, and even better, they paid enough attention to remember details of it!

Thank you all. I will try to write something more fitting to your tastes to repay you for this warm welcome.

Rawrs, I think you may be right that it may be the shocking nature of my story that has drawn so much attention. That means when my next story is more mild I can expect a small response, but the response to this story has been so huge that I will be happy with even half as much response. I think I went over the top on this story, so I will pull back on the next one.

What about this story frustrated you?

kundalinikat, you surprised me by saying positive things about the story. I'm glad to see that someone thinks it is well writen, even if the content is weak. I'm not still writing for that other site; I have decided that it's not for me, and I'm sure that most people on this site would hate it. In gratituted for your comments, I will give you the site address in private if send me a PM saying that you really want to know. Be warned that this story might be considered mild on that site.