Congratulations Aliensrus!

You have stimulated great discussion on this site because you have tried some interesting and different twists and turns in your writing.

I love that you set out to develop a theme and stuck to it. Good writing, good development of the theme and good fun!

Lots of time and effort went into this story and you definitely got a reaction from readers. The best compliment a writer could receive is engagement and reaction from readers.

Well done. I hope another theme will motivate you to once again share your creative talents with us loyal readers in the LPSG fictitious stories section.

Cheers

JJ