The better man.

"You have five seconds to get going or you will do another 500" said Derek. He was the assistant swim coach at my high school and was punishing me for the simple fact he didn't like me. I was a Senior at Jackson High and this seemed to be my most promising year in school, for sports at least. A little about me, I'm 19, 6’2" and 192 pounds with longer blond hair that I plan on putting into dreadlocks after I graduate. I get plenty of looks from the ladies with my cliché swimmers build, like an upside down triangle, broad shoulders, complete with pecs and six-pack abs that I have worked hard for this year. My hamstrings are the most pronounced muscle group I have seeing as how kicking is my best attribute in swimming. They are thick and meaty as are my calves.. I have a 8 and a half inch cock, six and half girth and two low hanging balls. I've seen bigger dicks but my balls always take the cake. Unfortunately still can't seem to grow a beard if my life depended on it. I workout about twice a week at the school and take protein shakes. Not considered the most popular kid in school I still hang out with everyone. I smoke with the stoners, I'm nice to the nerds but like to hang with the jocks from time to time. Basically I don't have a group.

I get along with everyone I know except for Derek. Derek graduated two years ago and we have been rivals since I moved here sophomore year. Derek was the star of the team. He could swim the 50 in 19.5 seconds and was an all state track star as well. 5'11" with black hair and naturally tanned skin he was who all the guys wanted to be and all the girls wanted to be with. Muscularly we are about the same (now at least) but I still think I look better being 3 inches taller than him. He was considered the most popular kid in school, ironically enough seeing as how he was such an asshole nobody really liked him, it was more popularity by sheer envy and force.

So my sophomore year is when it all started. First day of school I somehow got on Derek’s shit list and he shoved me around and gave me shit the whole day. Not easily intimidated I was merely annoyed but he could definitely of kicked my ass. At this time I was puny and he was fairly muscular. Imagine my surprise (not delight) when I went to swim practice only to see him, the captain, leading the team in stretches. He seemed real pleased to see me. Us being on the same team would allow him to demean me for a whole season. It was a rough set that day and I was beat.

My Coach’s name was Mr. Johnson and he was such an asshole. He was also the gym teacher at school and was very muscular man about 38 really fit. He always wore skin tight shorts almost like biking shorts. He was real intimidating up close, he was in charge and liked to show it. Anyway, after practice my coach pulled me aside along with Derek and a junior named John. He told us he was making each of us (since in his eyes we were the best in each of our class) the head swimmer of our lanes. We were split up by grades and we would help lead the practice and tell coach of any problems or special help someone needed. So after about a 30 minute spiel we headed to the locker room. John just headed out as he was late for work so it was me and "Derek the dick" as he was called left for the showers. I went straight in wearing my Speedo and then two minutes later came Derek strolling in dick swinging, towel on shoulder as machismo as could be. After about five minutes he stroked up the conversation. "Hey little kid". I looked around wondering who this "kid" was seeing as how I was about the same height as him. "Yeah you little bitch I'm talking to you, what’s your name." Angered "The name is Cooper" I replied. “Cooper huh, well my names Derek, you can call me Derek the dick for obvious reasons" Looking down to his five inch softie. It was big and thick but not that much bigger than mine. I chuckled at his balls seeing as how badly mine dwarfed his. He had pretty small balls. Enraged by my laughter he inquired. The arrogance he maintained was unbelievable. But I was not gonna let him shit talk me this whole year. I had to take some control. "I'll call you whatever the fuck I want" I said looking at his package. "It's not that impressive." Boy was he pissed.

"Why you little fuck, I ought to whoop your ass. If you aren’t impressed then let’s see what your hiding over there." Not wanting to get into a comparison in the showers (I was a sophomore who could blame me, especially since I was sure he had me beat) I just turned off the shower and started to head back to my locker. "Oh no you don't" He came up from behind me and put me in a full nelson. "You think you’re a man? You think you can disrespect me...” His cock kept slapping my thigh in the struggle. "..And then walk away? No. We're gonna see who’s the real man here." He threw me towards the wall and I slipped and fell. "Whip it out, let's see who's got what." Now I was pissed. I stood up pulled my Speedo off and threw it towards his face. Slightly blindsided "Eww..You mother.." I pushed him back and he slipped and fell. He stood up quick ready for blows but stopped to check me out. And there we were two naked guys in the shower with thick softies sizing each other up. I was sporting about three inches with about the same girth. "I guess we both know who wins this one" he said swinging his cock like a helicopter. "Oh yeah" fluffing mine "It does get bigger you fuck and at least my nuts are bigger than a sixth graders" That was like the gas in the fire and he ran at me. We locked arm to arm and were pushing for ground. Although he was stronger he had poor footing and I was able to overtake him. By this time my semi had grown to about four and a half inches and was a bit thicker than him. I had to prove myself, I had never been put down like this. But I wasn’t trying to get into a fistfight naked in the shower, I don’t think he wanted that much shit to go down either. We were more wrestling for manhood. To see who the better man was. So I went for the headlock, held him for a bit but he pulled out. Catching breaths we had another little size up, my cock was uncut and I had never really been able to look at a foreskin up close for such a time. His cock was sitting nice at six and a half length probably with five and ¾ inches girth. I stated “I told you it would get bigger” he mused “Respectable. How big does it get? Eight inches?” a little snide grin came to his mouth.

“Eight and a half” I corrected. He said his was right under ten. “but why does yours look so skinny?” I asked holding up my thumb and pointer. He was still growing, it raised to a 60 degree angle. He grasped his big cock at the base, he had rather small hands, I had some of the biggest hands out of anyone I knew, just another little thing I beat him at. “It ain’t no skinnier than your little chump thing.” I quickly returned “Bullshit” and he strode over to me stepping real wide, leaning back so he could thrust his pelvis towards me. With full on erections and the tense air between us more composed of testosterone than Oxygen it was very heated. Someone’s will would break, one had to lose. We stepped to the middle of the shower in show down style. We put them right next to each other with no regard for any touching of each other. This was sporadic and unplanned not sexual, this was war. I definitely was thicker. “Told you” I said. He made a small noise almost growled. I would guess he topped out at six for girth. “Shrimp Dick” he retorted, I quickly mocked “Anteater” mocking his foreskin. Guerilla Warfare. I had to admit though he had the body I wanted, the body I would later have through hours at the gym.

He slightly started rubbing his cock. “You lose chump” continuing to rub a bit more boastfully now. I matched his speed with my own and continued to argue. As we began to brag of our sexual conquests and who was the better lover it became a show of jacking off. No rules were set so it wasn’t to see who would shoot first or who would shoot more it was just happening. For about five minutes it went on back and forth putting the other down. Then his breathing increased and speech stopped, it was clear he was cumming. A thick rope came out and then another and a few more oozed out. It was a decent load, one I knew I could beat but it would be close. Thanking myself for not rubbing off that morning. I let myself go right after that and shot a bigger load than I ever have before. The first one between us, second one on his foot (Hah!) and after he backed up the rest were the same. I had won the unspoken challenge of wanking and he knew it. “This isn’t over, shrimp. We’re going to have a bet. I’ll find the girl and we’re gonna see who knows how to use what they have got.” The battle went to me. The war was going to be begin.

very nice would like to hear more

Thanks I need some feedback. After the chick contest should I bring in the coach at all? Not sure how it would tie in as much because neither one of the characters are gay. But the coach would have the same type of mentality as the two who continue to compete only he is older and would add a nice twist.

“Get going Cooper” I snapped out of the flashback and started swimming. God I felt so good that day. But ever since Derek had been made assistant coach I have had to do extra sets. It was just his way of dominating me. It didn’t bother me to bad because it’s not like the extra sets didn’t help me get to state. Not to mention he was winning here but this isn’t where it counted. I had victories when it did count. After that day in the shower we have had multiple encounters. From jerk off sessions to one v one fuck fests with different girls. I’ll recap.

The next day I was ecstatic I saw him in the hall and I boasted a wide grin. He bumped me with his shoulder and his friends laughed although he and both knew I was on top. The next week would include mild shit talking and staring each other down. Until Friday when he approached me at lunch. “Hey shrimp are you ready for that bet?” he said. “I have been waiting; you ready to lose…..again?” I could sense his competitive nature and this was going to be one wild weekend. He had something good in mind. I had to keep up the composure but I was a bit nervous. I have had sex with three girls and hadn’t gotten too wild with any of them. Just by the way he talked I knew he had fucked an onslaught of women. “Her name is Sarah and she is more than willing to help us settle this.” I didn’t really understand how it was going to work but I gave him my number and he was supposed to call me later that night. As soon as I got home I started watching…almost studying porn. He called me at about 9:30 and said that his parents were out of town and it was going to be at his house. First let me say that we do not like each other but there is a respect that has grown between us that is very unique. I think he may of sensed a little of himself in me as I was a stud in different ways. I had a confidence in me that he had to build in himself by putting others down and showing off. He also liked my package, it shined in ways he didn’t he had length on me and that’s it. So this contest with the girl is almost a test. He wanted to see me shine.

So I showed up to his house at about 10:00 with a tight fitting pair of jeans that showed the best I had to offer. He was drinking beer which was surprised me a little but I hadn’t drank much before so I was pretty stoked to drink. We made small talk as we drank and waited a bit. I had a whiskey mixer as I was disgusted by beer (I was a pussy no one likes beer at first). He popped in a porno and we chilled waiting for Sarah. Comments were of course made about the guy on the screens technique as well as his package (we both had him beat). He pointed out “Anteaters aren’t that uncommon” referring to the actors foreskin. “Neither are big balls” putting him down. The rude comment was out of place for the mood and he looked at me a bit surprised. I was feeling the whiskey by now and was getting a bit arrogant. It was 11:30 and Sarah was still not here. “So is your bitch gonna be here or do we have to jack off again?” I said jokingly. He told me to shut up and hit me in the chest as he got up to go call her. I was getting into the wrestling mood one of those drunk times where you just want to show off strength. He came back in and said she didn’t answer his call. “Well I guess I should of brought a chick, since you can’t seem to get pussy here.” He chuckled “Is that right and who could you get over here? Some little underage sophomore girl? No thanks.”

I hastily replied “Yeah you wouldn’t want her to know how much better I could do it than you.” He was very amused. “Wow kid you sure are a lightweight, maybe you have had enough haha” As he took my drink from me.

I stood up and grabbed him and maneuvered him to the ground and pinned his arms. He bucked up and overthrew me and we continued to wrestle for a few minutes. “You might as well give up.” He said as he pinned me. He was right, he simply was stronger than me. Frustrated I got back up on the couch and started watching the movie again. I was pissed I wanted to fuck a chick but was settling for drunk porn. So I whipped it out and started stroking. “This again..?” He was seemingly amused by my drunk and openness. “ If your too much of a puss…” “Oh shut up” he interrupted. He then pulled out his cock and started stroking. He did have a nice dick but I was more jealous of his perfectly muscled body.

Well just as in the showers there we were jacking again this time watching some amateur with a little dick pound a pussy while we sat there like chumps. We each kept glancing at the other. He was a bit reserved having long slow strokes accentuating its length. Me on the other hand I was giving it the gusto going all out. “Watch it there speed racer, you gotta make it last” he said in an experienced tone. Unwilling to take any advice from him I jacked harder. My big balls flopping all around. I scooped them up and looked over at him as I proceeding to fondle them. I smiled a bit I was just showing off my nuts. “Yeah I know” he admitted “You got some big hangers I’ll give you that.” Right then, perhaps the compliment sent me over the edge, I shot an enormous load of spunk all over my chest. “Not to mention you can shoot a bigger load than a horse.” With that the front door opened and in walked Sarah.

Now people I need some feedback here this is my first time. If it seems lame i'll stop writing it.

seems hot to me.

ok i've just open a bottle of wine, let me grab my cigarettes and read this long story and i'll tell you what i think

not too shabby, I like it alot. I'm curious to see where you go with this!

Actually this is extremely erotic! Continue!

Derek went to greet her at the door and I ran to the bathroom to clean up quick. “Fuck” I thought. Here had come this hottie right AFTER I shot my load. I zipped up my jeans and headed out to the living room. Sarah had to of been the hottest chick in our school. She was a senior, about 5’8 with perfectly round tits bigger than you would normally see on a girl her size. I’d guess her at about 110 pounds. What made her most fuckable for me was the ass. Oh that luscious ass, I couldn’t wait to have her say my name. “This is him? Fuck that! How old is he 15?” What a bitch! Now I really wanted to give it to her hard. Surprisingly Derek defended me. “Listen babe, you might be surprised this kid is more of a man than your boyfriend.” Taken aback I just stood there for a moment. “I’ll be the judge of that.” With that she walked over and straight up swung her hand to my crouch and gripped my whole package, still sitting a bit chubby of course. “Wow! Lot more than I’d expect from you kid.” Why do people always say kid? “The name is Cooper and there is a lot more I got to give you,” She looks to Derek. “Cocky….I like it.”

“I want to go first.” I blurted out. Mind you I’m drunk. “Hold on there big boy what makes you think I am just going to fuck you?”

“Uhh...” I was at a loss for words. “Because I asked you too..” Derek covered “..plus this kid thinks he can out fuck ME.” Looking back at me seeming intrigued she said “Well you sure got some big shoes to fill there…Cooper”

“So how is this going to work?” I asked. “Well..” Sarah replied “we’re going to go into the bedroom..” she starts to walk closer to me..”and we’re going to see” she starts to undo my belt “who here can make me cum the most” She drops to her knees simultaneously with my pants and boxer briefs as she starts to lick the head of my cock. “OMG… boy you are hung” she looks to Derek “and look at his balls! Derek your..” Derek interrupted “Listen. I know he has enormous balls, holy fuck! I’ve still got the bigger cock” With that she beckons him closer to do some double fisting comparison. Derek knows what’s up and takes off his pants letting his cock flop out. She leans over and pulls him right up next to me, by his dick. Now we are both getting our cocks sucked and jacked simultaneously. This also gives me another chance to size up from an upward view. Smiling up at Derek she insists “He also is thicker too..” Seeing as how he already knows this he is getting a little agitated. “Sarah I am gonna fuck you so hard..” She interrupts “Don’t tease me, plus we’ll see what I can handle after taking this monster” She continued to mock him, she was using me to tease him. I think she enjoys seeing a younger stud that might just be able to outdo the ‘master’. He looks at me, clearly pissed, and I am just rubbing it in sporting a gleeful smile. After her last comment she put all her efforts back on me. She could really suck a cock; she was getting further and further down my shaft with each bob. No girl had ever gone more than an inch or so past the head. It was clear this slut had been on her knees more than once.

I softly moan “Wow…that’s…nice..” She lowers down and laps at my nuts with her tongue, she takes one orb in her mouth and continues to switch between the two. Derek was stroking his length and directed her head back to him. This was good though, I needed a little off and on if I was going to make this last at all. Now I got a first hand view of the skill she had in fellatio. She was dedicated. I suggested we should all be naked and Sarah stood up and began to do a striptease for us. Derek patted me on the back, approving of my suggestion. She takes off her shirt exposing her lace bra, upon removal her big tits just flop out. I thought to myself how if she wasn’t in high school I would of swore it was surgery. She takes her pants and panties off. She had the most gorgeous body I had ever seen. I didn’t know anything about her but could deduce she had some part in either gymnastics or cheerleading. She strutted over to us and took a firm grasp of both of our cocks and said “Well boys shall we get started?”

We were led into the bedroom and she laid us down. For the next ten minutes she serviced each of us dutifully as we both got the blowjobs of our lives. “So big”…”I can’t wait to ride this cock.” ..”I bet you two might be the biggest at school.” She was an expert with her mouth in more ways than one. She talked dirty enough that I had to almost tone her out as to prevent from shooting in her mouth. I had almost forgotten that this was a contest. As I noticed Derek was flexing and started to talk back to her. He was getting the lead. I sat up and reached over her to grip that luscious ass, I couldn’t even get it all in my grasp. Then I rotated around as I lifted her and replaced on in my spot on the bed. I then spread her legs as my mouth quickly found its target. Surprised Derek quickly went to work on her breast. He slurped on her tits paying special attention to her nipples. I sucked, licked, swirled, and tongue fucked her vagina until my tongue felt like it was about to cramp. Her squirming had been increasing until she started shaking in ecstacy. “Don’t stop….omg…I’m cum…ugh..I’m cumming!” I continued licking until she lifted my head and lent in to kiss me enjoying the taste of herself. This orgasm went to me. She backed up and looked over at Derek and with a come get me smile said “Your already losing.”

Great story, a fresh angle. Technically pretty good, but don't be afraid to break up each new quote into a new paragraph like your grammar teacher taught you.

great writing. (hint: the word is crotch)

Yeah I really didn't know that lol but then my post would be like 10 pages long but i will incorporate that next time.

My bad on the spelling error.

When is the next part coming??