Lustful Teens & Size Queens

joed562000 · 03-27-2008

While I don't think writing a story about 14 year-olds is "illegal," the uber-precociousness of these kids is a bit much. If they were 17 or 18, it would seem more "plausible." At 14, fantasies are just that.

Otherwise, a great story.

sizemic · 03-27-2008

In Canada I believe this is... Section 163.1 of the Criminal Code. But whatever... i'll just stay away from this story.

lurker2008 · 03-27-2008

It would be such a great shame for this story to go to waste, i think you should change it to college students instead, still time for tim to grow then ;)

jacknapier · 03-27-2008

holy shit, just what I was looking for.

Please finish this story man... I can't wait to see more of Tim.

MuffDiver · 03-27-2008

With all the twisted stories out there about incest, rape, etc..., I wouldn't imagine writing fictional stories about teenagers would be legally inappropriate, but it doesn't matter because all the characters in this story are actually 18 years of age and older. They happen to coincidentally all be lying about their age to each other. Crazy stuff...

cockneylass · 03-27-2008

Nice answer muffdiver!
To get back to the story, I don't think TIm should grow any more, there is something wicked about the size difference between him and the other characters, I hope he especially remebers his Italian friend Tony being gigantic in the shower a few years ago... ;)

Narcisse · 03-27-2008

sizemic: in your story (matt : from growing tribe to toronto) the characters are 15 years old...aren't they ?&

jacknapier · 03-27-2008

Right on, cockneylass

sizemic · 03-27-2008

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Originally Posted by Narcisse

sizemic: in your story (matt : from growing tribe to toronto) the characters are 15 years old...aren't they ?&

nope 18, I made sure about that.

RenegadeStorm88 · 03-27-2008

what if you did a slight re-write to make them college freshmen? the 4 in there already could be doing this before the end of summer break sr year of HS then the go to college together, and meet the other chars, the younger bro could be there for a college visit when he appears in the story...

RenegadeStorm88 · 03-27-2008

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Originally Posted by joed562000

While I don't think writing a story about 14 year-olds is "illegal," the uber-precociousness of these kids is a bit much. If they were 17 or 18, it would seem more "plausible." At 14, fantasies are just that.

Otherwise, a great story.

That would also fix this

jacknapier · 03-28-2008

Don't worry about fixing it, muffdiver, just write more! There's nothing that needs fixing!

DeviantElite · 03-29-2008

yes in some countries is is illegal and if you feel you fall under that category, do not access it. I personaly think it is a great work and needs to be continued from its original state and not modified to fit political agendas.

brianj009 · 03-29-2008

make the lil one get showed up in front of the girls too

love it

DeviantElite · 03-29-2008

yeah, make Tim be like the Cuckold while Brian and the others fuck whoever they want.

It would be interesting to see heather and tim get together as bf gf because of their personalities, while tim comes to terms with the fact that he cant satisfy her and she will fuck brian if she is gonna be with tim.