I hope you finish or add to this story ... I'm really enjoying it. I think I can understand why it's not to spoiledprincesses taste. I think this story is more tailored to a male reader to be honest. A female reader might see a character like Doug and generally want to fix him by the end of the story but still have the main character end up with him. (sexist I know)

Sure the story is full of archetypes and flat-out stereotypes/cliche, but these exist for a reason. I think if you can take a stereotype(male fantasy of an all conquering phallus) that people know and change the perspective or take on it a little on the formula you can have a great story. Not everything is going to be, or needs to be completely original.

I guess what I'm saying is that even if it fails as high art for the princess, it will still make excellent jerk-off material.

Please feel free make the ending as dirty as possible ;-)