Hey Sizemic,

Love the build up of tension you are teasing the reader. And I'm loving it.

The fact that Matt is so innocent and Linda is the horny one that wants his cock is the type of hetero story I like. The plot lines where the girl/woman is the aggressor and loses her inhibitions because of the guy's incredible equipment is a popular theme and I like it. (Mothers going after daughters athletic boyfriends, clothing store clerks hitting on hung customers, etc.)

the challenge is to create the next twist in the story without tipping into the totally unbelievable. Good luck with it and keep going. I won't speak for others, but I'm keen to read more of Matt's adventures.

Maybe Linda should tell some of her shopping mall co-workers what happened and they set up a "Matt alert" around the mall and try to experience Matt's gift in the various change rooms of the clothing stores (just a thought).

when I am writing my stories I find the challenge is to have enough description to make it seem 'realistic' while not becoming silly or burying the hot action with too much story build-up.

You are give the story a good build-up and nice tension. But one thing man -- I still want the 'money shot'. Hopefully Matt gets lucky soon.

Maybe he needs to go home and have Sara tell him the facts of life about his gift and how he can use it or something. Over the course of the story he would learn how to enjoy his gift and give pleasure to others.

Just a thought.

Keep it cumming! Or should I say please make him cum more and sooooon!

JJ