Raiders Basketball, Chapter 1

ignore catman i thouroghly enjoyed the story so far keep it coming looking forward to more

Yo Vander! Are we ever going to get Chapter 2?

I'm waiting on chapter 2. This is amazing!

Chapter 1 of this story was awesome.
I check every day hoping that Chapter 2 will be here.
I can't wait.

I concurr completely -- great story. Wish you would write chapter 2.

Awesome story I'm also looking forward to a Chapter 2 and possibly future encounters with the old lady in the mall. Perhaps bringing someone else whos less fortunate as well to her...

Bumping this, as Chapter 2 is finally on its way.

Can't find Chapter 2.

I just want to know, how did his dick suddenly grow 9 inches overnight?
Maybe I missed something, I dunno, but I kinda wanted to find out. ;)

Well I must say that this story is incredible, I hope part two will be worth the wait, it's almost taking as long as a newborn to hatch!
Anyway, it was fortunate that the character took his dong out of his mouth or he might have experienced lock jaw!!! LOL
Imagine the poor guy having to go to emerg for help to get it out!!!
That would have been a tad embarrasing eh?

He helped out a supernatural being, or at least was polite to one, and he got rewarded for it.

I read this ages ago, glad to hear 2 is coming out!

Cant wait

Thanks for bumping this up...the story is great and I can not wait for the next chapter!!!

I think VanderAnder just wanted to get out hopes up, and then crush them like a bug.

I liked the supernatural quality to the story. However, I did think the set up and character development could be a bit more, er, subtle. It might have been more consistent to make the narrator, less than perfect. Also, more details of the fucking would be cool. Good job though, and get the next part done!