Holy fucking shit !! ......
You've reduced me to a puddle of goo in my chair......
Don't stop writing !
And you need to submit that a few more places online.....
http://stories.xnxx.com/ http://www.literotica.com/ http://www.pleasuremenow.com/index.a...S&Category=500 http://www.cleansheets.com/toc.shtml http://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/main.htm
The only thing about Kristen's is I don't think they're accepting any more submissions ......saw a notice there the other day....
Maybe they will change their minds.....
Still a ton of erotica there to read....