Chemistry Nightmare (warning: rape, violence)

It's wonderful. I can't express how gratified I am that the people here are taking my story so seriously. On most of the sites where I post stories, they are all but ignored. I don't mind that the reaction is negative, because at least it proves that someone has read the story, and even better, they paid enough attention to remember details of it!

Thank you all. I will try to write something more fitting to your tastes to repay you for this warm welcome.

Rawrs, I think you may be right that it may be the shocking nature of my story that has drawn so much attention. That means when my next story is more mild I can expect a small response, but the response to this story has been so huge that I will be happy with even half as much response. I think I went over the top on this story, so I will pull back on the next one.

What about this story frustrated you?

kundalinikat, you surprised me by saying positive things about the story. I'm glad to see that someone thinks it is well writen, even if the content is weak. I'm not still writing for that other site; I have decided that it's not for me, and I'm sure that most people on this site would hate it. In gratituted for your comments, I will give you the site address in private if send me a PM saying that you really want to know. Be warned that this story might be considered mild on that site.

Exactly! Let's lock him up because he wrote a story with content of which you don't approve!

Well that was pretty dumb. Ok so if someone writes a story about a guy raping people it's disgusting, but if a guy makes a movie with cannibalism, incest, someone eating shit, and someone being raped by a lobster then it's alright. You're a hypocrite. And what is this dumb shit about drug references? What does that have to do with anything, besides the fact that you're an idiot? If anybody made an idiotic comment it was you.

Well done.

I didn't like the story, but a piece of erotic fiction is often an exploration of how we feel about certain aspects of sex, sex often does contain a violent element and that element can be magnified in a story to explore it. Writing about something isn't a personal endorsement of what the writing contains.

Agreed, SP. Give the author a break. There are a number of erotic fiction sites online and this story is PALE compared to some of the stuff out there.

Who are we to get uppity about this stuff? It's FICTION! It was in the FICTION area...

Or do we disapprove of all things SMBD or "out there"?

Exactly, if this was non fiction then it would be unnacceptable. Just like a fiction story about a serial killer, even though it has graphic and disturbing parts doesn't make it a bad story and the whole point of those graphic and disturbing parts is usually to put some shock in the reader. Some people think just because the story is on this site it has to be sexually arousing. I don't think everything on this site has to be about sex.This didn't personally look like strictly a sex story to me. The guy was injecting himself with something that gave him the desired outcome but at the same time turned him into a crazy rapist. The moral of the story is: "Be careful what you wish for."

Perhaps for you. Speak for yourself.

So if someone was writing a true story about raping women, it wouldn't bother you?

I actually read it as a Jekyll and Hyde story, that it was about releasing the animal inside you would destroy the human.

I can see how it relates to that too.

Jekyll and Hyde and other horrow stories where a scinetist starts off a decent guy and turns into a monstor after applying the potions to himself definitely came to mind when I was reading it. The moral could be, if there is one, don't try to change yourself with chemicals.

What would bother me was the fact that he was raping women, not the fact that he was writing about it.

Well a fiction story means it is made up. So why did you say speak for yourself when I said it would be unnacceptable for a person to write a story on here about raping someone and claiming it is true.

Because I don't find the posting of stories of illegal activity and claiming said story to be true to be necessarily unacceptable, although, depending on the case, I might find the rape in question to be objectionable.

"Hey, dont touch that boiling water! Its hot! You are going to burn yourself!"

-puts hand in water-

"Oh my God! I burned my hand! Who dare boil this water! How irresponsible!"