Doug's Comeuppance

Princesssss....

play nice in the sand box...

I hope you finish or add to this story ... I'm really enjoying it. I think I can understand why it's not to spoiledprincesses taste. I think this story is more tailored to a male reader to be honest. A female reader might see a character like Doug and generally want to fix him by the end of the story but still have the main character end up with him. (sexist I know)

Sure the story is full of archetypes and flat-out stereotypes/cliche, but these exist for a reason. I think if you can take a stereotype(male fantasy of an all conquering phallus) that people know and change the perspective or take on it a little on the formula you can have a great story. Not everything is going to be, or needs to be completely original.

I guess what I'm saying is that even if it fails as high art for the princess, it will still make excellent jerk-off material.

Please feel free make the ending as dirty as possible ;-)

It looked like there were three people in that bed, Charlotte, Mark, and Mark’s dick. As Mark turned, his penis stood straight as a lighthouse and was just as impossible to ignore. It cast a shadow over Mark’s chest until Charlotte got her hands on it. With a hand on each side of his dick, she stroked the massive phallus. “I really love your dick,” she said to him.

“Is that all you like about me?” asked Mark, playfully. “I have a mind, you know.”

“Yes, you have a great big fucking mind,” said Charlotte, as her mouth opened wide to take in as much of the tip of his organ as she could. She said something else but apparently it wasn’t worth taking the teenager’s dick from her mouth to say it clearly.

Mark curled his abdomen, his stomach muscles tightened without strain, as he stroked her hair. “It’s OK, baby,” he told her. “You suck my cock so good.”

The comment must have really went to Charlotte’s head. Her mouth opened wider so that she could take in all of the head of Mark’s cock. I thought she would have to dislocate her jaw like a reptile. Her hands began to stroke his cock faster, working it furiously. Charlotte’s large breasts hung down, inches from the bed, and Mark’s right hand scooped up a handful of her tit flesh. Charlotte’s whole body was busy on the cock, almost every muscle of her upper body working to pleasure her teenage lover.

I felt Julie stumble next to me. I was concerned they might hear us. I pushed Julie away from the door and then tried to steady her. She had lost her balance. “I don’t believe it,” she said to me after we were out of earshot. “Oh my, Doug.”

“It’s OK,” I told her.

“That boy has got a huge cock,” she said.

“Not as big as mine,” I corrected.

Julie looked at me, astonished. “Did you see that thing? It’s a lot longer.” Her eyes went to the floor as though she was thinking, trying to make sense of it. “And so thick too.”

“It’s an illusion,” I told her. “Side by side, you’d see I have more dick.”

“Oh God, Doug,” said Julie. “I don’t know what to do with you?” She walked over to a chair and sat by the window. It had just started to snow pretty heavily. There was already a blanket of white covering trees, the road, and Charlotte’s car, glowing under reflected moonlight. She stared out the window like it was the most interesting thing in the world. “So big…” she sighed.

I couldn’t accept that the boy’s dick was bigger than mine. I had never heard of such a thing. I had to see it again. I crept slowly back to the door, keeping my head low. I went to my hands and knees, then slowly pushed the door open.

Charlotte and Mark hadn’t changed their positions much. Charlotte now had a heavy layer of sweat from the exertion. Mark, on the other hand, seemed almost rested, his sturdy dick taking all the pulling and stroking Charlotte could deliver. Suddenly, she stopped and leaned over to say something to Mark. “I want you IN me, baby,” she said.

“Are you ready,” he asked. He reached down and grasped his own cock at the base even as she stroked it with two hands just above it. It swelled with his grasp, with the anticipation that it was going between the legs of one of the most beautiful women I’ve known.

“Oh yes, Baby.” She said to him. “I’m dripping ready.” She already released her grasp on the cock and reached one leg over his chest. She positioned her obviously drenched pussy over the huge cock. Her vagina looked inadequate to take something the thickness of a beer bottle. It seemed that was the case here. As the head of the dick touched her entrance, her pussy lips quivered, as though in fear of the massive intruder.

Mark’s hand was under Charlotte, trying to prevent the woman from hurting herself by impaling her on his huge appendage. As badly as the boy must have wanted it, he was still reluctant to just shove it in. “Easy, Baby,” he said. The huge pointed pink head separated and then pried open her body. As the cock eased itself in, Charlotte was clearly stuffed with cock, stretched to the breaking point.

“Oh God, Baby,” she said to him. “You get bigger every day.”

“No way,” he said. “It used to not fit at all.”

“Yeah, but you didn’t get smaller. I worked hard at it,” Charlotte insisted. “Every day, ten times a day. Practicing getting that cock in me.”

“I think I worked on it too,” said Mark as the head and one inch of shaft disappeared inside Charlotte. “I think I was in the room.”

“GOD DAMN FUCKING SWEET,” Charlotte shouted. “OH FUCK.”

“Baby, the door is open,” said Mark. “They can hear us.”

Charlotte took a few seconds to respond as another three inches of steel hard cock went inside her. “It’s OK, Baby,” she said. “I’m sure they went to bed.” Another three inches of cock went in. I counted eight inches of cock in her and at least another four to go. Clearly though, it had reached the end of her tunnel. “Doug has a big cock too, according to Julie. She’s getting a good fucking.”

“As good a fucking as this?” said Mark.

“AHHH,” Charlotte screamed as she was thrust up into the air. Mark had, with one move, pulled himself out of bed, pushing Charlotte along with him. His thick muscular arms held her up in the air, lifting her up and down on his huge glistening cock. Charlotte had her arms on Mark’s big shoulders, enjoying the ride, eight inches up, then eight inches down, a cock in her pussy with each cycle.

Charlotte must have weighed a hundred pounds of firm body and another twenty pounds of tits. Still, it was no match for her young muscular stud who held her like she was made of helium. The muscles in his leg were well defined and barely strained under both their weight. She was no challenge for his arms either, the bulging muscles never showed any strain from constantly lifting her weight. Charlotte was the one looking exhausted after five minutes of having the boy’s huge cock pulling her body apart.

Charlotte’s breathing became more rapid. Her hands went up to Marc’s thick hair, running her hands through it. “OH OH DON’T STOP BABY.”

“I can do this all night, Baby.” Mark promised. Indeed, it looked like he could.

“DON’T FUCKING STOP OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD.” Charlotte screamed louder. I can’t imagine how anyone within a mile couldn’t hear her. “I’M GONNA COME, BABY..” Mark put his hips into the action, driving his cock up into her as he lifted her up and down on his cock. It looked so easy for him. “I’M COMING BABY…OH GOD I’M FUCKING COMING…”

Charlotte must have yelled that for a whole minute. Mark was having no difficulty with her weight but she was in some kind of orgasmic tremor that made it difficult to hang on to her. Mark did hold on to her though, even as Charlotte became a madwoman, yelling insanely about her coming, her limbs flailing in ecstasy.

As she settled down, Mark put her down gently on the bed. His thrusting continued, each push driving her up onto the bed. “I’m gonna come too, Baby,” she told him.

“Don’t pull out,” Charlotte said. “I beg you.” Charlotte grabbed his back.

“We already talked about it,” Mark said, calmly. Mark’s considerable strength pulled her arms away. He pulled his cock out of her vagina with a sucking sound. It looked as proud and sturdy as the bow of a ship. He held her legs down and pushed her hands away as she tried to get the cock to aim downward between her legs.

She failed. Mark’s semen flew over her body like canon shot, landing on the carpet at the other side of bed. It would be quite a mess as salvo after salvo arced over body, missing her intended target like friendly fire. The sound of semen striking the carpet almost drowned out Charlotte’s sobs. “I want you to put a baby in me,” she said.

As Mark started to lose distance, spots of sperm landed on Charlotte’s body. She scooped some up and tried to put it inside her. Mark prevented her. “I’m sorry,” he said. “I have enough kids already.”

“You have kids with other women,” said Charlotte, giving up on getting impregnated from the puddles of semen laying on her skin. “We’re going to get married. You can put a baby in me and it will be our love.”

“Are you sure you want to?” he asked. “You don’t want to wait?”

“I’m ready for your baby now, Baby,” she said to him. “I love you. I’ll never meet a man like you again.”

Mark nodded. “OK,” he said. The two kissed for a minute, their tongues taking turns in each other’s mouth.

“I love you,” she said. “You are the best. Not just sex, either. I really love you.”

“I love you too,” he said.

“Should we wait a few minutes for you to recover?” Charlotte asked him, giggling, turning her body around.

“You know better than that,” Mark replied. Charlotte was already on all fours, Marks semen dripping from her body onto the sheets. Mark pushed his seemingly fresh cock behind her. “OH GOD,” she said to the young boy who was already on her ass, giving her the cock she craved.

“It will just be a minute,” he told her. Mark was really thrusting rapidly. He was truly humping this girl, the only goal to impregnate the beautiful woman. His eyes were glued to her round marble ass, on a body that any man would die to fuck just once.

“No hurry, baby,” said Charlotte, helpless against the onslaught of the massive cock.

“Hey,” said Mark. “Is that someone on the floor?”

Mark was looking right at me.

Another really enjoyable section of the story. I really enjoyed reading it. Also having the same first name (Charlotte) as Mark's fiance really helped me picture myself in that situation.

Please keep writing as I'm really really enjoying it so far.

Nice work... looking forward to the climax, so to speak!

Loved the installment again. I am really enjoying where you are going with this story. Look forward to more installments.

Would love to read more of this story...

Aliensrus, may we please have more?

I like it... I like it!! but I think I found a mistake:

Mark did hold on to her though, even as Charlotte became a madwoman, yelling insanely about her coming, her limbs flailing in ecstasy.

As she settled down, Mark put her down gently on the bed. His thrusting continued, each push driving her up onto the bed. “I’m gonna come too, Baby,” she told him.

She's had an O (as described by her insanely yelling about her coming and in the paragraph that leads to this O yelling description) So, shouldn't it read: "I'm gonna come too, Baby," HE told HER instead of "she told him?"

After all, she's had a great ride and I believe it is his turn at that point and the next paragraph is about him pulling out and getting ready to have his OOOOOO!

I also like how "cum" can be "come" in literary efforts like this. keep it going please!

lol! battle of the bulging cocks

cant wait for the next bit

this is a great story cant wait for more

Please! more!

Said it before but i'll say it again, this story is quite pleasing and we're all ready for the next installment!

I can honestly say this: Can't wait for the next part.