Trying to find this story

About a kid fucking some guys wife and in the end the kid was fucking the wife and moved her towards the window so all the other kids could see him do her.

Thats not very nice is it letting the kids watch her being fucked, perhaps you could look for a nice Barbara Cartland novel instead

This story is deff sounds like one on literotica... the guys friends dare him to bed any girl, and they pick this girl who has a husband at the beach, and all the friends are watching him bang her from the window?

Don't ask, I click the random story button...

haha

'My Brother's Wife' it's on www.Literotica.com
It's actually a good read. The only disturbing part is that he impregnates half the town and brags about it.

I might be the author of that one. I posted it here in several parts. If so, I'll go look for it.

Try this link.

My Brother's Wife

That is a great line about Barbara Cartland. I'm impressed with your range of knowledge in romantic fiction.

"My Brother's Wife" on Literotica is different from my story, I think. It's good, just not mine. I've never posted on Literotica, or any other story site for that matter. Writing on the forum was fun because the feedback was so intense.

Let me know if you liked it. I considered writing another one but reviews were mixed.

Aliensrus,

I had forgotten about this story. It is a good read and you definitely should keep writing.

I like writing erotica and posting it here on LPSG ... To our critics well all I can say is ... This is called the "fictitious stories" section for a reason. It is where we can post fiction stories about large penises.

The feedback is sometimes good and sometimes bad. Anyone who works hard to produce a good read in the spirit of the "Large Penis Support Group" should be encouraged.

So I say ... keep going Aliensrus.

It's fun posting and reading the stories in the erotic fiction section BUT why don't people at least give them a quick spell check before posting them, people may say spelling doesn't matter but of course it does. In most cases it's our mother tongue, for God's sake we should be able to spell it.