Millionman, Beckx23 and Duchess,
Thanks for the feedback and the kind words.
I am a little surprised that after over 1,500 hits on this story (in less than three days since the original story was posted) that there are only three responses. I haven't even received any private messages offering feedback or suggestions.
As I said before, I do this for fun and half the fun is getting the feedback either publicly or privately from fellow LPSG members. So come on folks -- as the stand up comedian says -- work with me here!
I had fun doing this story because it was in response to a specific request from one of the female members of LPSG who sent me a private message to say she "liked thunderstorms".
I'm not sure there is much more I can do with the thunderstorm theme and not sure where this story might go next. It could go in a couple of directions:
1. Miss Krippen could take our young hung hero back to her place. We could have straight sex or get kinky ... lots of possibility here. Maybe Miss Krippen lives with her sister who is also a size queen...
2. The Principal, Mr. Washington, could show up in the parking lot and catch the two of them in the act. He is a big physical man and he has fucked Miss Krippen (see "The Principal and the Math Teacher"). I'm just not sure what happens between him and Leon. Maybe someone could help develop this story line.
3. Several of the boys from the basketball team could find Leon and the teacher in the parking lot. I'm not into 'gang bangs' so I'm not sure how that would play out...
there are lots of possibilities ...
Or, maybe this story line should just come to it's natural conclusion. Now that Leon has lost his virginity he can go on to other exploits with other partners -- male and/or female.
maybe we pick up another adventure of Miss Krippen or go back to the Principal's office for another adventure with another teacher or one of the parents ...
Anyway, I appreciate the comments so far. I need more feedback.
Based on the feedback I'll see If I can get inspired to write another chapter...
In the meantime, I did pick up an idea from a thread on LPSG over the Christmas holiday. I think it was titled something like "showing at work" I can't seem to find it now. Anyway, someone said they worked with a female body builder at the office who commented on his bulge. Apparently they got into comparing sizes at the office but didn't have sex. I was intrigued by the possibilities of a story like that.
Is the story line of sex at the office with a female body builder of any interest? I'm having a hard time trying to figure out how to make it sound realistic. Any advice?
Cheers
JJ