From Penis Growing Tribe to Toronto - Tribal Matt's Adventure

millionman

I thought this was a very good contiuation. I really did enjoy the teasing above all else. The characterization of Matt has been consistent and he hasn't turned into a sex fiend which I find to be most impressive. Sizemic you thought this out very well and I really appreciate this effort. Keep up the good work.

cooldude_hunglow

Great story, please go on with it.

It is a unique and incredible story.

crescendo69

very erotic - looking forward to more

jjsuperbird

Hey Sizemic,

Love the build up of tension you are teasing the reader. And I'm loving it.

The fact that Matt is so innocent and Linda is the horny one that wants his cock is the type of hetero story I like. The plot lines where the girl/woman is the aggressor and loses her inhibitions because of the guy's incredible equipment is a popular theme and I like it. (Mothers going after daughters athletic boyfriends, clothing store clerks hitting on hung customers, etc.)

the challenge is to create the next twist in the story without tipping into the totally unbelievable. Good luck with it and keep going. I won't speak for others, but I'm keen to read more of Matt's adventures.

Maybe Linda should tell some of her shopping mall co-workers what happened and they set up a "Matt alert" around the mall and try to experience Matt's gift in the various change rooms of the clothing stores (just a thought).

when I am writing my stories I find the challenge is to have enough description to make it seem 'realistic' while not becoming silly or burying the hot action with too much story build-up.

You are give the story a good build-up and nice tension. But one thing man -- I still want the 'money shot'. Hopefully Matt gets lucky soon.

Maybe he needs to go home and have Sara tell him the facts of life about his gift and how he can use it or something. Over the course of the story he would learn how to enjoy his gift and give pleasure to others.

Just a thought.

Keep it cumming! Or should I say please make him cum more and sooooon!

JJ

The red cock in the Avatar is not me...

MrMXYZPTLK

More Please

beckx23

asshole!!! thats just mean but its fuckin awesome!! keep goin im on the 'edge'!!!

bigboy1986

was that the end of the story? or is there more?

sizemic

> Sorry its been a while yet again, got to love school... I will be updating more often from now on, promise.

> This is just the start to part 5, more continuation to cum...

PART 5 - Have your cake, and eat it to

Matt returned to a dimly lit house with only one bedroom light on, Sara’s, shining into the night. He opened the door to the sound of girls talking loudly and giggling from Sara’s room. He was tired and stressed from the day’s earlier activities and the last thing he wanted to deal with was a bunch of loud girls having a party.

He tried to shut the door quietly so no one would know he was home, but to his avail the door gave a loud creek as it closed.

“Damn!” he said under his breath.

“Matty? That you! haha! come up here bud, ya gotta meet everyone!” he heard Sara shout from her room. She sounded weird to Matt, almost like she had been hit hard in the head and was groggy or maybe she was drossy from staying up to late. “Ya commin? Matty? haha” she yelled again. She never called him Matty, he knew something was up.

“Yeah, one minute, I’m coming,” he said with a sigh. He left his new clothes by the basement door so he could take them down later. Slowly he walked through the hall so he could listen to what the girls were saying and maybe get a feel of how inviting they may be to him. After all, he is very scrawny, tanned and self conscious a little about how he looks and he has never had a girlfriend.

“Who the hell is Matty?” he heard one girl say.

“Irene’s nephew, he was my best bud from like way back, he went like missing in Africa or some other shitty place and like came here after being gone for like ten years haha,” she managed to say, somewhat audibly. When Matt reached her room he could smell a strange smell coming from her room, almost like really strong mints or cologne or something mixed with that stuff that stings when you put it on wounds.

“Is he hot?” he heard another girl say.

“Well… haha once you get to know him HAHA! he is probably the hottest guy you will ever meet! haha,” Sara responded. That comment made Matt smile.

Wow, that’s pretty cool that she thinks of me that way, I never would have know that she likes my personality that much he thought. Because of that comment, he had the courage to open the door and enter the room.

“Heya Matt!” Sara said with a smile. He looked around the room and saw bottles of different types of alcohol scattered around the floor. “Let me introduce these bitches haha!” she shouted.

“This one’s Vicky,” she pointed at the girl next to her.

TO BE CONTINUED SHORTLY...

sizemic

Vicky was stunning. She had white porcelain skin and long wavy dark red hair. She was wearing a baby blue tank top with no bra underneath showing her nipples poke through protruding from her generously perky D cup breasts. She was quite small at maybe 4’10” and 110 or so pounds. It was surprising to see such massive breasts on such a little girl. She smiled brilliantly as she looked at Matt.

“Hi, I’m Matt,” he said as he shook her hand. He blushed.

“This bitch is Carlye,” Sara said as she pointed at the girl beside Vicky.

Carlye wasn’t bad herself. She had straight long black hair and looked as though she had a slight Asian Caucasian mix about her. She was a slim 5’7” or so, a very light brown skin tone and brown eyes. She had the best very full B cup and a nice ass, bigger in proportion to her body, but tight and perky.

“Hey Carlye,” Matt said as he shook her hand.

“Kay, last but not least is this bitch. Her name is Mary, we call her virgin Mary because she is such a fucking square… She wants to save it till marriage… haha she don’t know what she is missin!”

Mary was beautiful. She was about 5’3” with straight brunette coloured hair which was streaked with lighter browns in a pony tail and some stylish black framed glasses. She had a nice glow about her that just radiated off of her face. He couldn’t tell how big her breasts were because they were hidden under a baggy hoodie. Matt shook her hand and she smiled and said hi.

“Well bitches, there is something about Matt that he isn’t telling you, haha! Tell them Matt!” Sara demanded devilishly.

“Tell them what?” he said confused.

“You know…” she said as she gave him a big wink of the eye.

“I really don’t know!” Matt was getting tired of all this.

“Oh fuck, you dumb shit!” She yelled as she crawled across the bed over to Matt. “Ladies, get ready for the hottest thing you will ever see…” she said, starring at Matt.

“Sara, your scaring me…” Matt said, still confused. She didn’t even look up at him as she grabbed for his belt. She had it removed in about two point two seconds as she fiddled with the button on his jeans.

“Shit, buttons are so hard when you are wasted! Fuck! let him out! let it out!” Sara screamed in a drunken furry.

“What the hell is she doing?” Carlye said to Vicky.

“A kid that skinny probably has a tiny needle dick, I don’t know what she is doing, she’s so fucked haha,” Vicky laughed.

“Got it!” Sara screamed as she ripped Matt’s pants down to the floor, exposing his 13” flaccid penis.

MORE IS CUMMING SOON...

screwball

damn it man more, we nee dmore

Tru_african

Hilarious,,,, anyone want any insights on this tribe? lol

Live life by the day, never expect the unexpected

beckx23

dear god put up the rest i need more!!!

bigboy1986

no update sizemic? :P tut tut tut

newe

enjoying this so far, but if his softie is like a foot long his hard-on should be a good 14 to 15 or more it seems to me. but, i think you said his hard-on was like a foot too.

just a bit confused.

john

Soron

really good story. please write more