11-06-2006
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| | | High School Slut: Shower Encounter Hey there. This is my first story in a while and I would really enjoy some time of comments/criticism. I really enjoy writing these stories, but I need feedback to see if I should continue. So please if you like them, say something! The story is open so that it can either end, or continue; you decide! Okay So here it goes: High School Slut: Shower Encounter I walked into the shower quietly, towel tied limply around my waist. I could hear the sound of the water spraying against the tile already, and knew that he was in there. I smiled and rounded the corner of the shower and was greeted by the site of his backside. His strong back muscles bulged slightly from his workout today, and his ass, oh my god his ass, was like the orb of heaven….more like the two orbs of heaven. It only had a light dusting of dark hair, and a line of dark hair from the crack to his hefty balls. He stood there, is arm resting pushing against the shower wall to support his weight, as the water cascaded down his beautiful naked body. He hadn’t heard me enter, and it wasn’t until I let out a sigh of lust did he actually turn his head towards me. He smiled seductively at me, and I could not help but smile back. I turned from him, exposing my back to his lustful gaze, and began my quick strip tease. I allowed the towel to creep down my legs, and finally drop to the floor full exposing my ass and back. I pretended like it was all an accident and bent over to pick my towel up. While doing so my hairless crack and rosebud became fully exposed to him, calling to his hot meat. I smiled at him through my legs as I saw him tremble with desire. I sucked on my index finger alluringly, and then rubbed it up and down my asshole. I gave it a soft push and within a second it had completely disappeared into the depths of my ass. Quickly two more fingers joined it, and I gave a small gasp of pleasure. My other hand rubbed my erect nipples, and down my abs to my stiff eight inches of cock. Slowly I jerked my meat while filling my own asshole, all just to entice him. Suddenly I noticed him walking towards me, shaking with desire, but I quickly stood up and faced him. Shaking my finger I took a few steps closer to him. “Ah, ah, ah” I said disapprovingly. “You know how this works, I decide.” His dark green eyes were almost filled with pain as they lusted after my young sixteen year old body. His rich, full lips shook in a pout, and it drove me over the edge. I walked over to him smiling, and flung my arms around his shoulders as my lips brushed against his quickly. He immediately responded by pulling me up off the ground, to sit in his arms as we made out passionately. Our lips never seemed to part, and there never seemed a need for air. His tongue darted all over my mouth, massaging mine, and everywhere else possible. His mouth left mine finally after ten minutes, and moved to my neck, kissing every inch possible. My lightly defined pecs and nipples became his next target. I groaned in lust, and pleasure as my hands ran through his wet, dark hair, massaging his scalp. Soon his mouth was back on mine. He was still holding me, and soon turned me around so that my back was to the wall, and he was in control. My hands quickly moved from his scalp to his massively protruding pectorals which resembled mountains, more than they did muscles. As my hand was filled with flesh, my thumb rubbed against his quarter-sized nipples in small circles, causing him to gasp and moan, in between our locked lips. My hips began to thrust, and I started humping his washboard abs. His hot ten inches of meat were pushed up against my ass, begging for attention. He shifted me to one arm, and began to fuck my hot ass with his fingers. I knew that within a few minutes, my ass would be pounded with ten solid inches of rock hard teenage flesh. He withdrew his fingers and let me drop to my feet, our lips still never leaving each others. Both our cocks were leaking a fountain of precum, but all of it was washed away by the water pouring over our naked bodies. Soon my lips left his and I began to kiss down his massive body. It was quite a feat, as I tried my best to not miss any inch of him. He lifted his heavy arms, and my tongue licked his hairy pits. My kisses found their way down his valley of abs and finally to the ultimate prize. His pubes were shaved away, which made his cock even more intimidating, but I had handled his before and bigger than even his. Seductively I licked all around his shaft and down to his grade-A-egg sized balls. “Oh yeah pussy-boy, you like my mammoth sized balls don’t you? You like my muscle-ridden body and massive cock. Come on boy, put it in your mouth, just for me baby. Just the way I like it.” He took his thick sausage in his hand and slapped it against my face. I grabbed it from him, and stared at it head on. I licked up and down the shaft like it was candy. Then slowly my tongue swirled around his purple helmet and it vanished inside my mouth. Quickly his cock was engulfed by my expert mouth and throat, and now there wasn’t even cock to be seen. While his cock lay deep within my throat, his hands took the back of my head and forced me up and down. I gagged only slightly, but just from the force from which he used on me. And trust me; being dominated by a stud like this was worth the slight gagging. Quickly I let off his cock, and kissed up and down the shaft one last time. He looked down at me, with a wicked grin plastered upon his face. He chuckled slightly and then pulled me to my feet. He turned me around, and started to feel my slim body with his powerful hands. My head rolled back, and he lightly kissed my neck as I moaned. For a jock, making love to a slut in the shower, this whole experience was considerably romantic. His hands found my eight incher, and quickly engulfed it. He jerked it slowly, teasing me. Though my cock was larger than normal, his hands were HUGE and easily took up half my shaft. He stopped after a minute of almost completely bringing me to climax. He grabbed his cock and began to rub it up and down my ass crack, enticing my whole. I moaned once more, desiring to be filled and overflowing with man meat. Finally his cock head pushed against my hole and quickly the rest of his dick followed suit. Within a minute of taunting cock play, his meat was swallowed by my ass. He began a steady beat. He would almost completely bring his dick out, and then ram it all the way back in. Every beat was a small wave of pleasure through my body, and my cock was rock hard, and almost completely pushing against my stomach. After about this slow fuck for ten minutes, he pulls out and pushes me to all fours. He kneels down and gets behind me, slipping his cock into my tight ass. This time though, he’s going in for the kill. He wants to get his rocks off, and he’s not going to let anything stop him. He begins to pound my ass relentlessly, his balls, so large that they fly everywhere, slapping my ass anywhere they want. As I leaned over, I screamed for him to fill me more. “Oh god, fill with your fucking monster cock. Yes, yes, yes! I want to you to pound me, fill me, and bring me to places I’ve never been. Give me that huge meat big boy! I WANT YOU! Yesssssssss!” Our panting is out of control. I can feel every throb of his cock, and I know it will be a minute or two before he cums. He grabs my sides even harder, and grunts even more as I moan in ecstasy. This is it the big climax! He draws out of me, and turns me over, so I’m on my back looking up at him. He face contorts, and squeezes in undeniable pleasure, as his hands rub his cock. My own hands can finally take control my own hard-on, and it’ll only be a few jerks, before I spray all over. He lets out one final scream, and his cock explodes like a fire hydrant. His first rope of cum flies right into my face, and open mouth. His cock keeps spurting and seems like it will never end, twelve, thirteen, and finally fourteen sprays and this stud is done. I jerk my own cock three times, and douse myself in my own manjuice. I lay there, covered in more cum then after a drunken, frat orgy. My stud collapses next to me, his big chest rising and falling significantly with each breath. I turn my face towards his, and he turns his towards mine and we lean in for one final kiss. | | | |
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11-13-2006
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| | | keep writing buddy .. that was hot.. im drippin'... | | | |
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01-26-2007
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| | | Diary of a High School Slut My name is Kyle, Kyle Brown. I wasn't always the High School Slut... and in fact I never really meant be it. I guess you could say I just fell into it. Just like any other typical teenager, I had a one-track mind for sex. Sex, sex, sex. It was all I could think about, especially freshman year. I had discovered jacking off back in 6th grade, and had been longing for some type of sexual interaction with anyone. See, I'm bisexual. It's not necessarily because I'm attracted to both sexes, but more I'm up for anything with anyone that can bring me pleasure. Of course, I prefer guys. What's not to love about having a hot rod shoved down your throat as you finger a guy's hole? But I'm getting sidetracked. I went into high school, planning on having some form of sex by November, be it with a boy or girl. Naturally my favorite place to be was the locker room and I found any excuse to be there. I would purposely leave books behind, or pretend I was searching for a friend. One day while in there, I saw posted on the bulletin board that the football team was looking for an equipment manager, I jumped at the chance... ------------------------------- "Equipment manager?" my dad repeated as we sat around the dinner table. "Do you even like football?" "Yeah, I love it...you know The New York Patriots are my favorite team" I responded eagerly... "New England you mean?" "Oh yeah, yeah, that's what I mean, just a word slip" I replied turning a little red. "Uh huh..." "So just sign the paper and I'm in!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The next day I proudly handed my permission slip to the coach. "So...Kyle", he said checking my name on the paper, " Have a seat. Why do you want to be the equipment manager?" "Oh well I think it would be a great opportunity for me to take responsibility. My mom always says I'm idle, and I thought this might be a perfect opportunity to show her that I can be responsible. Plus it's something to put on my college resume" I said while sitting down. I had prepared and memorized my answer for this question in case it was asked the night before. "Oh, a freshman looking to the future...I like that" he added with a smile, and then stood up. It wasn't until then that I realized what a striking man he was. He was about 6 foot and couldn't have been older than 45. His face was square jawed, and he had a light coat of stubble. His eyes were a dark green-gray, and seemed to go beyond your outer expression and really see you. His hair was spiked in the front and was a dark brown, with gray flecks and patches starting to show. He was wearing a white tee-shirt with a faded logo, and track pants. He was a broad man, and you could tell that in his younger days he was a true muscle head. The muscle was still there, just not as defined. I also noticed the gold band around his finger. The coach got up and closed the door. He placed his hands on my shoulders, and leaned down so his head was next to mine. "I really like that..." My heart pounded, heavy in my chest. I felt his warm breath against my cheek, and I sprung the biggest erection of my life in no less than 5 seconds. "Well, well, well, just as I thought" he said softly, his eyes tracing my bulge down my shorts. I felt his soft lips press against my cheek. In that one moment of contact, a giant shudder went down my spine. He continued to kiss my cheek until finally I turned my mouth to meet his, and our lips brushed for a second. We kissed a few more times, until finally our lips were locked and could not be parted. He drove his tounge into my mouth, and massaged mine. By this time I was standing up, and somehow making out while walking over to his chair. He plopped down into his, and suddenly I was straddling his lap. As soon as I sat on his laps, i felt it, his cock. It seemed massive while sitting on it, possibly as large as a snake. Later, i would realize he was only about 7 inches, but at the time, my tiny 5-inch trouser snake looked more like your garden variety compared to "his anaconda". I pulled back from his lips letting out a little gasp of awe, and he just smiled. "Do you want to see it?" he asked, with a sly grin on his face. All I could do was nod, and slide off his lap as he pulled down his trackies revealing his cock sticking out of a jockstrap. He quickly pulled it to around his ankles, and nodded for me to move in. I had seen so many handjobs, and blowjobs from internet porn that I knew what to do right away. I placed both of my hands on the warm flesh pole and began to pump. He let out a soft moan of approval, and I knew I was doing something right. Next I leaned in closely and hovered my lips about his cock, allowing my warm breath to wash over it. His hands met the back of my head in desire, and pushed my mouth onto his cock. He didn't remove his hands, and soon I developed a steady motion sucking his cock. I gagged and coughed a few times, but nothing that serious considering it was my first cock. My hands were now exploring the rest of his body, rubbing up and down his stomach and finally finding his balls. Now THOSE were impressive. I don't know how I could've missed them earlier. Each one felt like an overly large egg, and I could only wrap my hand around one at a time. That really got him going and he forced my head down even father on his cock. His dick seemed to swell now, and even I could tell he was going to explode soon. Just before his eruption, he pulled out of my mouth and jerked his dick once or twice, and then BAM! A rope of cum splattered on my face, then another and another, rope after sticky rope. Finally his cock stopped, and all he could do was let out a giant sigh of relief. Somehow in the mess of sucking his cock, and getting my first facial, my own had cummed what seemed like another gallon in my own shorts. I looked up at him eagerly, and he looked back at me smiling. He leaned in and kissed me again, taking some of his own seed with him. He licked it and then stood up, walking over to a coat rack where some towels were hanging. He cleaned himself up and then threw me the towel. "Here, you look like you need this." I mumbled a thank you, and cleaned up myself as best as I could. I wasn't sure what to say or think, all I knew was that I had just experienced my first sexual encounter, with a teacher nonetheless, with a hot married teacher! I headed towards the door, wanting to sing, when suddenly his voice rang through the air. "I'm certain you're going to make a fine equipment manager Kyle...fine indeed." ----------------------------------------- And that was only the beginning of my high school slut days... [Okay, I just decied that I liked this story, and that I should continue it with an actual plotline. I want you to tell me what you think, and what you think should happen next. I want you to tell me, what you want to hear about. Comments/criticisms are, as always, appreciated. Thanks.] | | | |
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01-26-2007
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| | | Both of your stories are extremely hot and in my opinion, pretty well written. My biggest criticism would only be about the font size being too small and difficult to read through.
Other than that, I would like to ask/suggest that you take it up to at least college aged. You can still keep 'em young, first year, etc. I know it's all fantasy, but stil...
Man, there are so many places that you can go with this. The QB, other players, a cheerleader or two.....
Definitely continue!! | | | |
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01-29-2007
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#5 (permalink)
| | Banned | Wow. Good stuff, definitely well written, A+ | | | |
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