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Do you do Haiku?

Post your favorites or create your own arresting visual! One of my favorites: The phantasm of falling petals vanishes into moon and flowers One of my own: Brushing light on my lips rising stamen springing

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Old 08-22-2006   #1 (permalink)
mercurialbliss is offline
Do you do Haiku?

Post your favorites or create your own arresting visual!

One of my favorites:

The phantasm of
falling petals vanishes
into moon and flowers

One of my own:

Brushing light on my lips
rising stamen springing forth
blossoming artist
 
Old 08-22-2006   #2 (permalink)
invisibleman is offline

Invisibleman
Loves haiku so much that
he let let it be known.

Happiness can be
Yours. If you can get out of
the way of yourself.
 
Old 08-22-2006   #3 (permalink)
DC_DEEP is offline

Untalented me
Attempting to write haiku
is not a good thing



Soft autumn sun shines
warmly on my buttocks as
we fuck, and both cum.
 
Old 08-22-2006   #4 (permalink)
naughty is online now

Ok... who said the limit was just two? I am off to an appointment, but when I return... watch out! Wonderboy. dazzle 'em!

My love is a poster child from Biafra.
moot
and no longer politically relevant.

You are the original recipe
Come to my table
And let me dine
 
Old 08-22-2006   #5 (permalink)
Wonderboy is offline

Open your eyes up to
The sights and sounds around you
Before they are closed

You smell like haiku
A thousand flowers made of shit
You smell like haiku

Rain falls and sun rises
By Nature's eternal command
I take cock in hand

Bathed in bathos
As a bukkake girl in cum
This is what I do

The cow, she says moo
A cow lay down signals rain
Cows are good to eat
 
Old 08-22-2006   #6 (permalink)
DC_DEEP is offline

The gentle koto
And soft, sweet shakuhachi
Blend to soothe your soul.
 
Old 08-22-2006   #7 (permalink)
Wonderboy is offline

Forlorn me, I cry
With each breath, my soul escapes
How to replace you...
 
Old 08-22-2006   #8 (permalink)
DC_DEEP is offline

Here's one I wrote for my man while he was away on a business trip...

I sit here cursing
that hateful eon-second
when we are apart.
 
Old 08-22-2006   #9 (permalink)
COLJohn is offline

Quote:
Originally Posted by DC_DEEP
Soft autumn sun shines
warmly on my buttocks as
we fuck, and both cum.
DC's haiku stinks
But his big cock is really hot
So we forgive him
 
Old 08-22-2006   #10 (permalink)
DC_DEEP is offline

April brings the rain,
but greedy August hoardes it
killing my garden.
 
Old 08-22-2006   #11 (permalink)
COLJohn is offline

Quote:
Originally Posted by DC_DEEP
April brings the rain,
but greedy August hoardes it
killing my garden.
I amend my post
That referenced post number three
This one resonates
 
Old 08-22-2006   #12 (permalink)
invisibleman is offline

The Tao Te Peen

The Way of the large
Is the unvarying way.
"large" meaning penis.


KFC

Think not what you can
do to your lovers at a
KFC buffet.


The Pink Brute

The brute strikes again.
He's all Pepto Abyssmal.
Wintergreen obscene.



Reverence

Prehensile penis.
Lube is stranger than friction.
Topics of sermons.


 
Old 08-22-2006   #13 (permalink)
COLJohn is offline

Quote:
Originally Posted by invisibleman
The Tao Te Peen

The Way of the large
Is the unvarying way.
"large" meaning penis.


KFC

Think not what you can
do to your lovers at a
KFC buffet.


The Pink Brute

The brute strikes again.
He's all Pepto Abyssmal.
Wintergreen obscene.



Reverence

Prehensile penis.
Lube is stranger than friction.
Topics of sermons.

I really like "Reverence," Invisibleman.
(I also confess to to putting an extra syllable in line two. LOL.)
 
Old 08-22-2006   #14 (permalink)
invisibleman is offline

Reverence

"Prehensile penis."

"Lube is stranger than friction."
Topics of sermons.


Quote:
Originally Posted by COLJohn
I really like "Reverence," Invisibleman.
(I also confess to to putting an extra syllable in line two. LOL.)
I make mistakes. Oh well. Hehehe. Happy that you liked the haiku.
 
Old 08-23-2006   #15 (permalink)
madame_zora is offline

I don't stay true to the syllabic requirement, but here's an old one:

There was a morning
Vaccuous purple yields gingerly
From obsidian sound surroud
 

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