Porn, art, or just plain pretentious?

Very Burroughs of you.

WTF mate!?!?

Wouldn't the world be boring if we were all the same?

Creative juices flow the best when our surroundings are boring as hell.

Alex8: Stay away from the Kool-Aid, dude! You write bloody brilliantly though!
Pecker: That goes for you too! No more Kool-Aid for you, cos this site's not ready for a psychedelic Pecker yet!
You may both give your critics a special Mkhonto-smack upside the head, and tell them it's from me.

Honest critique from a guy who usually just reads tech manuals: That is one of the most creative, disturbing short stories I've ever read. I'm really bad at picking up on symbolism, but the imagery is right up there with Poe - although it lacks a rhythm, which would really enhance the story...

i used to date a guy who wrote like that. he had a small cock and ejaculated too soon. not saying he was a bad author...