I am a horny bitch...

This is better! Still not stand alone, as it needs something of a hook to pull the reader in and make us (me) want more.

Anyway, I would make it more accessible to a variety of readers. For example, I would change Vonetta Flowers into a more well known figure, limit the drug use, and maybe change the language a bit? Of course, you could always say "I don't want your input, ho!". If so, I'll shut up and wait until it gets to the sex. ;)