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Originally Posted by ChockoKittie  Hmm, just my opinion, but I do not think this works as a stand alone excerpt.
Maybe if there was something sexual or like a detailed flashback of his first awareness of a growing attraction to men? Just a thought. :) |
good point but slowdown your horndog you, lol, i'm gettin there. the main character has been straight his whole life and a few chapters into the book develops a curiosity towards other men