This is a rape fantasy. I don't know what the statistics are on this but a lot of women have these kinds of fantasies, enough to make it completely normal. Rape,as a reality, is a violent act, a crime, and about control more than sex. Rape fantasies emphasize the control part that some women find appealing. I guess what I'm saying is the story is fine, at least in my opinion.

Iloveoral1985, thanks for taking the brave stand against rape. You've convinced me rape is wrong. Wow.