Thanks again for the comments here and the pm's from readers. I finished editing Part 1 and Part 2 of this story, and have submitted these to Literotica - 100% free sex stories, erotic audio, adult fiction with wifeslut, bdsm, etc!. (My grammar really crashed at the end of this draft!) It takes a few days to get approved on that site, but you can always check out the list of published stories at the following.

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