Well, I do like hairy men, but it's fine if you don't show John much... Cause I'm not a fan of the bearish type.

I like all three characters and wouldn't consider the story such a success if it weren't for all three...

I say keep it up, you're doing an excellent job with an excellent style !

Oh, and to those who think Todd is unrealistic, I personnally know someone with a huge cock (something like ten inches, or more), and a body to rival what you describe for Todd... I ahve seen it, toched it, and have been lucky enough to sleep with the guy for a while ! We're not boyfriends anymore, but, just so you know... this kind of guy does exist, even if the pool situation is honestly a stretch, like a scenario for a porn film.

But hey, it's all right, I liked it !

P.S.: Sadly, I'm not that well hung, but I do okay at seven inches.