Hey Silver:

Thanks for the encouragement... I have had a couple of private messages from LPSG members telling me they like the character Emmanuel best.

In Hero 69's post he said he liked him too...

In one of my private messages someone has even started referring to him as "Manny". Maybe I'll work that new nick name into the next installment.

I was thinking that the muscular, well endowed athlete, Todd Mitchell, was going to be everyone's favourite character, but maybe he is too unrealistic. Nobody has shown any curiosity for the older foreman, John, the big hairy bear. I'm glad because in my mind he is a physical turn-off and I would find it tough to work him into the picture.

Anyway, I will try to think about a new plot twist to increase Manny's profile and make it interesting for the next installment.

It is Canadian Thanksgiving this weekend and we have lots of family visiting so I probably won't be able to do much writing this weekend ... keep watching I'll try to add something over the next week or so...

In the meantime, keep the comments coming folks. I love the feedback.

Cheers

JJ