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Old 09-06-2007   #12 (permalink)
millionman
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Alysen, I like the concept of this story, but it's coming off as a bit clinical and is lacking a bit of the passion that you have presented in your other stories. I know that you are going to move this along and I'm anxious to see where it leads. Don't be afraid of stepping out of the "class" structure and have some free willing loose ended sexual escapades between students, teacher, and the "aides".